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Weather Forecast: Fall fell upon the hidden Rain pack sooner than expected. Each day temperatures inch down lower and lower, but it's still too soon in the season for any strong rain. Nights are comfortable and alive with prey similar to the day. Rain showers and known to hit us this time of year. These showers come and go throughout the days lasting anywhere from a few minutes to hours on end! The territory is returning to it's lush mossy glory as this ideal weather continues to progress.
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...Chancer...

Post by Chancer on Tue Aug 20, 2013 7:30 pm

Wolfs Name: Chancer
Wolfs Nickname(s): none
Wolfs Age: 3
Wolfs Gender: male
Rank Desired: Hunter
Photo of Wolf:
Build:Chancer is strong but a little on the lean side. He has a broad chest and long, spidery legs.
coat color: He is a a dark steely, gray with white paws and lighter muzzle.
eye color: A clear, electric blue.
Wolf's Breed: Southern
Personality: Chancer is a relaxed, calm but playful wolf. He would do anything for his pack, putting himself before others. His 'playful' side sometimes gets the better of him though and he ends creating a mess.
History of your Wolf: When Chancer was a pup a flesh eating disease tore across their valley, killing out most of his pack, he and a few others were lucky to escape.
Strengths of your Wolf: He is fast and powerful.
Talents of your Wolf: His longs legs proved him with speed and agility like no other.
Weaknesses of your Wolf: He is not the best leader, he crumbles and falls when it comes to telling some one what to do.
General Habits: Chancer prefers to be out hunting, running or helping someone.

Crush: none
Mate: none
Pups:none
Friends:none yet
Mother: died
Father: deceased
Siblings:dead
Other: Has a bright red scar that runs along his hinds leg from a previous encounter with a bear.



Your Level Of Activity (From 1-10):7
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Re: ...Chancer...

Post by Niyol on Wed Aug 21, 2013 9:15 pm

Alright, Chancer... I cannot accept you, but I will say this:

My Opinions on what you should add or change:

I'd like to see more of the history (this is not mandatory, as you know) and some more personality so I, and the other members can understand your wolf better (again, you don't need to do this but it gets you a better chance at being accepted).


So, the only thing I really have a problem with is this:

Talents of your Wolf: His longs legs proved him with speed and agility like no other.

What I am getting from that is that your wolf is perfect in agility, just because of the words and placings of them.
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Re: ...Chancer...

Post by Chancer on Thu Aug 22, 2013 5:38 am

That's Ok. I understand, I am not always the best at sign ups.
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Re: ...Chancer...

Post by StormShadow on Sat Aug 24, 2013 4:34 am

when you fix it {Or if you want to} let us know by posting under this comment if you don't want to change or add anything just post "N/A" Onder this one
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